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Paradise Found

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I adore peacocks!!! Especially the white or Leucistic. as they are called! So incredibly beautiful!

Peacock courtesy of Maple Rose Stock [link]

Cherry Trees courtesy of Alegion Stock [link]

Thank you to the stock providers!
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First of all, very nice extraction of the stock images. I also like how you framed the image with the two trees bending towards each other like an arch.

A few things to improve on:
- The horizon looks too straight and clean. Maybe instead of a straight horizon, make some hills. Also, blur the line between the sky and the ground slightly, to give a sense of perspective (distance)

- The trees look a bit flat. They should be perpendicular to the ground, but right now, they look like they're flat against the ground (esp if you just look at the trunks). Maybe some shadow will help give the perspective and make the trees "stand up"

- The peacock blends in a bit too much with the background. The colour being similar to the sand, as well as the perspective (same problem as the trees). Again, some light shadow underneath it will make it "grounded" and some context.